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The Big Idea
Okay. So youve figured out
that you would like to write for magazines, newspapers,
and e-zines. Unfortunately, so have about eight gazillion
other people on this planet. Therefore, you have to stand
out from the crowd. You have to sparkle. How do you do
this? Simple. It all starts with The Big Idea. The first
secret you must learn in this funny business is that you
dont actually have to write the whole article to get a
job. In fact, only bright green novices attempt to write
the whole thing before selling it. What you do need,
however, is the IDEA for the great story. You will use
this great idea to convince editors to pay you exorbitant
amounts of money via a proposal letter (called a query
letter. But youll learn about that in a minute).
So, where will you find
this Big Idea? Well, youve heard that wise adage write
what you know. Thats a wonderful mantra for finding your
jumping-off point. You dont need to stick to what you know
for the specific focus of your story, but tap into your
already huge vat of knowledge to find the storys basis.
This is how you will become an expert. Experts are in
demand. People with stories arent. What you have to do is
sneak your stories into your areas of expertise. Example:
lets say your hobbies and interests include fishing,
watching talk shows, and traveling. Good! You are a
potential expert in those areas. Jot these things down.
Now comes the fun part: brainstorming.
The biggest mistake you can
make in pitching your story is being too general. Never,
ever send a letter to the editor suggesting an article
about fishing. Not even an article about fishing in
Florida. This vagueness is not appropriate for short
writing. In general, you will be expected to write
somewhere between 800 and 2000 words on your topic. You
couldnt possibly tell us all about fishing in 2000 words.
What you could do, however, is give us a comparison of
twelve different lures used to catch sailfish. Or the pros
and cons of joining a fishing club. Or even how the moon
can tell you if itll be a good fishing day.
So heres your first
assignment. Get out your trusty notebook. (If you dont
have one, stop reading and get one. Right now.) On the
first page, write down a list of any and all topics that
interest you. Its okay to be general here. Need some ideas
to get you started?
Think through your whole
day. Dont neglect anything. What do you do from the moment
you wake up until the moment you fall asleep? You turn off
your alarm clock. (An article about alarm clocks
disrupting valuable sleep stages! Or waking up to music
versus waking up to that annoying beeping sound. Or the
optimal number of times to press the snooze button.) You
brush your teeth. (Article: What all those touted
ingredientsfluoride, peroxide, baking sodareally do for
your teeth.) You take a shower. Maybe with your
significant other. Lucky you. (Romantic showers for two.)
Moving on. You go to work.
This is the most obvious area of expertise. Lets say youre
a secretary. How ergonomic office equipment can save you
from Carpal Tunnel Syndrome, an achy back, and a stiff
neck. How to avoid screaming at your boss when hes a total
idiot. Five couples (or ex-couples) share their wisdom
about dating in the office. Think about what cover story
would entice you to pay three dollars for a magazine. You
dont have to have the knowledge to actually write the
article yet. You just have to know you can get this
information later.
Next, you come home. What
happens? Do you have kids? Great! A wealth of article
ideas. You could write about childcare agencies, potty
training, decoding teenage slang, teaching table manners
youre getting the idea now, right? Run with it!
Write at least one page of
general topics that interest you, then weed out the most
interesting ones. Narrow it down to three or four. Then
write those three or four topics on top of brand new
pages. Now fill up those pages with specific article
angles. Just write. Dont edit yourself. Dont judge. Just
write whatever pops into your head. If you need
motivation, play it like a game of Scattergories. Set a
timer for ten minutes. See how many ideas you can jot down
before the timer sounds.
Keep in mind that there are
markets for almost any conceivable topic. Dont limit
yourself to the headlines youd read in Vogue and Good
Housekeeping. Between newspapers, consumer magazines,
trade magazines, e-zines, tabloids, literary journals, and
more, youre bound to find an appropriate publication for
your Big Idea.
You want to know more about
these markets? Read on!
Researching the Markets
First, youll need a few
definitions:
Consumer Magazines: These
typically pay the best. These are the types of magazines
you might find in a grocery store check-out line,
convenience store, in your airplane seat pocket, or your
doctors office. Types of consumer mags: mens, womens,
special interest, inflight, teens, school/career, travel,
health, ethnic/minority, political, entertainment,
romance, religious, etc. This is the area most writers try
to break into.
Literary Magazines: These
dont pay much, if at all. However, what they lack in
moolah, they make up for in prestige. If youre looking to
jump-start your career as a fiction writer or poet, your
best chance at recognition may come in the form of one of
these small publications. Often published by colleges and
universities, their circulation is usually regional and
low. They generally seek scholarly essays, intellectually
challenging prose, poetry, and book reviews. Publishers
will be impressed if you succeed in placing your work in
one of the more prominent journals (Cimarron Review,
Ploughshares, and Story, for example).
Trade Journals: Pay varies
greatly. Any publication that focuses on a particular
occupation/industry falls into this category. This is
where your expertise can shine. There are trade journals
for almost every line of work, from art dealers to truck
drivers. In general, your written eloquence is not as
important as your research and timely knowledge for these
publications.
E-Zines: Pay varies
greatly. Simply put, e-zines are simply magazines on the
Internet. The only major difference is that articles for
e-zines can usually run longer than print magazines. (No
printing costs, so space isnt as important an issue for
e-zine editors.) Most e-zines dont pay (except by means of
a byline) but this trend is changing. The most popular
sites (Lifetimetv.com
and Wired, for example) pay quite well. Topics stretch as
wide as your imagination.
Now that you know, learn
how to contact them!
There are tons of ways to
find markets that are open to freelancers. If you were
paying attention, you might notice that this very website
is looking for writers! Finding places to submit your work
is easy if you know where to look.
First, the most important
tool in a freelancers toolbox is The Writers Market.
Available at any major bookstore, this is an annual
compilation of more than 2,000 magazines, 1,000 book
publishers, and even specialized markets like greeting
cards, script writing, and syndicates.
The next best tools are
online. Lucky you! Theyre free. Absolute Markets is a
weekly e-zine filled with market guidelines, contest
listings, and marketing tips. Freelancing4Money puts out a
jam-packed e-zine filled with freelance opportunities.
Writer's Digest has a great, searchable database of
markets. Writing For Dollars has a biweekly newsletter
with market guidelines, and a searchable database on the
website. And Writers Weekly lists calls for writers and
market guidelines each week.
You can even run a search
for freelance writers on any major search engine, and
youre likely to come up with tons of listings. Try
specifying if possible; add words that fit your needs.
(Example: paying markets, romance, teen magazines.)
So, your next assignment is
this: go back to your trusty notebook and pick out your
very favorite idea. That will now be known as your Big
Idea. Pick the markets that best fit your idea. Choose
several. Find out if you can get a free or discounted
sample copy. (Writers often can, if you specify that you
would like to query them in the future.) Request writers
guidelines if available. Its considered poor form to query
publications that youve never read, or know nothing about.
Do your best to read at least one copy of whatever
magazine or journal you plan to query. Check your library
for copies if you prefer not to go broke researching.
Got it now? You have your
idea, and youve found places to submit it? Great! Then
you'll need to learn proper protocol for writing and
submitting the Killer Query.
The Killer Query
The job of the query letter
is to entice an editor to say, Hey! Id be interested in
learning more about that. Therefore, you dont want to
spill all your secrets and research yet. You want to tease
and tantalize. Now that youve got your fabulous Big Idea,
your job is to condense (or expand) that idea into two to
three paragraphs.
To illustrate the
components of a killer query, here is an example of one of
mine (using fictitious contact infosorry!) that landed me
the assignment:
Jenna Glatzer
(Always use proper formal letter format)
123 My Address
My City, State, Zip Code
(555) 555-5555
Mr. Joe Shmoe
(Make SURE to get a name of the appropriate department
College Life 101
editor. Never address a letter to editor or submissions.)
123 Their Address
Their City, State, Zip Code
Todays Date, 2003
Dear Mr. Shmoe:
(Colons are used in formal letters. Commas are used in
friendly letters.)
Think company cars, expense
accounts, and a spacious office with bay windows. Who do
you picture running a business this successful?
(Start the letter with a
zinger that captures the essence of your proposed
article/story. Raise a question that will cause the reader
to think, or give a visual image anything that will make
him/her want to read on and find out what youre talking
about.)
Think again. This company
was the brainchild of three Boston University sophomores
whose ambitions led them to thriving careers before they
had diplomas to hang on the wall.
(The rest of the first
paragraph should give a concise description of the focus
of your proposed article. Remember to tell why its
appropriate to the publication youre querying. In this
case, I was targeting a college magazine, so I made sure
to emphasize the relevance to their subject matter early
in the letter.)
Charles Strader, Richard
Skelton, and Pablo Mondal run Net One, an Internet Service
Provider. The three met in the freshmen dorms, then moved
into an apartment together. Opportunity knocked when
Strader, who worked for the universitys computer center,
took a phone call from the owner of a hair salon. She
sought help designing a website; Strader volunteered, and
Net One was born.
(Again, concisely, get a
little deeper into the content of the article. What is
special about your story? In this case, I wanted to
emphasize that these guys were college buddies who started
a booming business by branching out from their humble
beginning.)
Working closely with
friends to build something we believe in is Mondals
favorite perk. Skelton agrees. We have great trust in each
other, and feel that were all in this together.
(Quotations arent necessary
in a query, but its nice to give something specific to
show that you have done some research into your topic, and
that you have access to resources that will enable you to
write the article well. I wanted to show that I had
already spoken to these guysthey happen to be friends of
mineand that they would be upbeat and inspirational people
to interview. You can accomplish the same effect by
including a few quirky facts or survey results youve found
out about your topic.)
Considering that their only
capital was a computer and a small loan from Straders
father, the guys feel very successful. Were not
millionaires, but we have goals, and were following them,
says Skelton. I think thats true success. By any
definition, Net Ones roster of more than 50 clients
ranging from colleges to Fortune 500 companies attests to
their hard work and talent.
(Look, editor. These guys
are big up-and-comers! Notice I mentioned Fortune 500
companies. This lets the editor know quickly that these
college guys arent small potatoes. It neatly ties up the
opening sentence, which promised an article about guys who
have a spacious office, expense accounts, and company car.
Now the editor has a reason to believe that these guys
actually are that successful.)
I propose a 1,000 word
profile for your Students At Work section.
(Shows Ive researched their
magazine. I know which section this should fit, and Ive
read their guidelines to determine an appropriate word
count.)
I am a full-time freelance
writer, and my works have been recently featured in such
publications as 201 Magazine, College Bound
(Notice I mention the most
relevant magazines first. Anything youve had published
that might relate to the content, tone, or audience of the
proposed publication belongs here.)
Bliss!, Working Women, and
Video Librarian. Clips are enclosed.
(If youve never had
anything published, dont distress. Just shut up about it.
Do NOT tell anyone, Though Ive never been published yet,
Im a real go-getter. Less is more. If you keep quiet, they
may not even think about the fact that you didnt mention
your credits. Also, do not get into a diatribe describing
how you edited your high school newspaper. Just a quick
list of relevant writing background. See below for info
about clips.)
I can provide documentation
and interview notes for easy fact-checking, and could
submit the completed article within two weeks.
(Optional. Some people like
to suggest a time frame, others let the editor do it. In
general, the editor will tell you when the article is due,
regardless of your preferences. Its a nice touch to
mention how you will research your article. Mine was
primarily dependent on interviews, but you may wish to
include the names of journals/experts you plan to quote or
use for information.)
I look forward to your
response.
(Obligatory polite ending.
Use any variation you wish. No pleading. If you dare type,
I promise to write a reallllly, realllly good article!
Please hire me!, you will incur my wrath. I will hunt you
down and yell at you. A lot. Just a simple, dignified
ending requesting a response.)
Regards,
Jenna Glatzer
(Oh. Substitute your name
and preferred signature ending. Unless you feel like
sending your paycheck to me, in which case, you can feel
free to use my name. Grin.)
Finally, clips! If youve
had anything publishedor even if you havent, but you have
a few good writing samples appropriate for this type of
marketinclude them. These samples are called clips, and
they are used to show the editor that you are an
intelligent, insightful, funny, clever, and/or excellent
writer. Photocopy your articles straight from the
publication. Just 2-3 clips.
When you're sending queries
by e-mail, you can paste the text of your clips into the
body of the e-mail (never as an attachment!), or you can
direct the editor to one or two website URLs where she can
view your articles.
Interviews and Profiles
I know, you feel weird
about this one, right? Youre uncomfortable calling someone
or visiting a business to ask a professional to take
precious time out of their day to help you research your
article.
Well, buck up, little
camper, because most professionals absolutely love to be
interviewed. They jump at the chance, for a few reasons.
These are the reasons to keep in mind when you feel small
and silly for asking:
- It shows you respect
their opinion and/or job.
- It gives them
opportunities for publicity of their business.
- It gives them the chance
to brag to friends that they are quoted in a magazine.
- It gives them something
to frame and show clients.
- Finally, someone is
recognizing their genius and taking an interest in
their work.
- Theyre usually wannabe
writers, anyway, and they will be just as happy to
pick your brain to find out how you got the job.
Before you approach
experts:
Make sure you already have
your questions mapped out, at least briefly. What exactly
do you need to know from this person? What could this
person tell you that no one else can? Avoid yes or no
questions. Ask open-ended questions that could lead to
lengthy responses chock full of great quotes. Also, have a
synopsis of your planned article ready, so you can tell
your expert what youre writing and how they can supplement
your knowledge.
How to approach experts:
Get on the phone. Have your
idea condensed into 2-3 sentences, so you can quickly
explain yourself to whomever answers the phone.
Hello. My name is Jenna,
and Im writing an article about the rise in vegetarianism
among young women in Nevada for Youth In Nevada Magazine.
I know Dr. Spuds is a well-respected nutritionist, and Im
hoping she would be willing to answer a few questions on
this subject.
At this point, the
secretary will say, Hold, and make you listen to elevator
musak while she summons the boss. Or shell take down your
number and have Dr. Spuds call you back. Or it will be Dr.
Spuds herself, and shell say, What do you want to know?
Your options at this point
are (1) Ask questions over the phone, right then and
there. Make sure you check to make sure your expert is not
pressed for time before you begin. (2) Set up a phone date
to conduct the interview. (3) Ask if you can meet in
person. This is goodalmost necessaryif the person will be
the focus of your article. If the person is being used
just to add a few quotes, you dont have to meet in person,
because its unlikely youll ever need to write, Dr. Spuds
wrinkled her brow and stared into her pea soup as she
explained that young women are becoming more
health-conscious. (4) Trade e-mail addresses and send over
a list of questions. This approach isnt usually the best,
because it doesnt allow you to react to, and build from,
information you gain in answers to previous questions.
However, if the publication will not reimburse you for
long distance phone calls, and you have to conduct a
lengthy interview, e-mail exchanges are acceptable. Just
make ! sure you specify a due date for the responses. Be
reasonabletry to give the expert a week to answer all your
questions.
The Sales
Okay, you sent out your
killer query, and you got a phone call from an editor with
the big news: you got the assignment! Congratulations,
you! Go on and do a little dance of joy, then crash back
to reality with your new mantra: GET IT IN WRITING. Make
sure the editor tells you that a written contract is
forthcoming in the near future.
If youve researched your
market, you probably already have an idea of the pay rate,
but be sure to cover this ground in that initial phone
call if the editor fails to mention it. Important things
to remember:
On Publication vs. On
Acceptance
You not only need to know
how much youll be paid, but also, when youll be paid. Many
markets want to pay you on publication. This can be a
problem, because many magazines and journals have long
lead times. (Translation: a long time between when they
assign you the article and when it actually ends up in
print.) If you write an article in January, and it doesnt
get published until November, you probably wont see a
check until December. Do you want to wait a year to get
paid? Can you wait that long? This is a point you
absolutely can negotiate. Ask for payment on acceptance.
If this is refused, it gives you a little leverage to work
with on the other issues, which are
Kill Fees
If you get the assignment,
and, for whatever reason, an editor decides not to print
your article, you can negotiate for a kill fee. This is a
percentage of the sale price. If you are offered $200 to
write an article, you may get a $50 kill fee. Its a well
known fact that big publications kill articles all the
time. Some editors admit to assigning 10-20% more than
they could ever fit in the magazine. They do this so they
can pick and choose from the final products, or so they
can see how things fit once the layout is complete. Some
articles will be pushed back to other issues, and some
will just be trashed.
Bios
We like them. Those are the
little blurbs that often follow an article, giving short
biographical information about the writer, and sometimes
an e-mail address or phone number. Ask for one if you can.
Sidebars and Photos
Those are the little
factoids or columns that rest next to the main article.
For example, in an article about exercise, youll often see
a little chart on the side that tells how many calories
are burned by doing specific exercises (riding a bike,
climbing a hill, etc.). If you can suggest sidebars, you
can often get extra pay. Same goes for photos. If youve
got a decent camera and a good eye, offer photos for a few
extra bucks.
To Spec or Not To Spec
Especially as a novice
writer, youll sometimes get asked to write an article on
speculation. This means that youll have to write the whole
article and submit it without a contract, or any promise
of payment. Its a bone of contention among professional
writers, because almost no other field works this way. Its
never do the job, and then Ill decide if I feel like
paying you. Only in this crazy business. Harrumph.
That said, I advise you to
take spec assignments in the beginning. Once youre
established, you shouldnt need to do this, but in order to
build up your resume and your clips, you need to get
published. So go ahead and submit on spec, and go ahead
and do a few free/nearly free pieces for the experience.
Before submitting anything,
though, make sure you know in advance what the terms will
be if the editor does use your piece. How much will you be
paid? What rights will they buy?
Even many of the big
markets have adopted the practice of requesting pieces on
spec. They do this because they can get away with it.
Because there are thousands of wannabe writers out there
who will beg, borrow, and steal for the chance to be
published. So, if you want to compete, sometimes youll
have to suck it up and accept this. Once the publication
accepts one of your spec pieces, youll be a much more
likely candidate for an outright assignment next time.
Rights to Write
There are several kinds of
rights a publication may buy:
First North American Serial
RightsThe newspaper or magazine has the right to publish
this piece for the first time in any periodical. All other
rights belong to the writer.
One-Time RightsThe
publication buys the nonexclusive right to publish the
piece once. The writer can sell the same article to other
publications simultaneously.
Second Serial Rights (or
Reprint Rights)Also nonexclusive. Gives the publication
the right to reprint an article that has appeared
elsewhere.
Electronic RightsCovers
CD-ROMs, e-zines, website content, games, etc. Get in
writing which electronic rights are specified-- First
Electronic Rights, archiving rights, etc. Most
publications ask for the right to archive
"indefinitely." You can try to negotiate for a
fixed term (i.e., archiving rights for six months).
All RightsPretty
self-explanatory. You can never sell this piece to anyone
else again. Try to avoid this one. Most publications ask
for First Serial Rights.
Work-For-Hire Rights-- The
publication has come up with the idea and assigned it to
you, and they will own it, lock, stock, and barrel. They
own the copyright and don't even have to give you credit.
It may be sliced, diced, repackaged, re-sold, etc., and
you won't have any claim to it beyond what you were
originally paid.
TV/Motion Picture
RightsAlso self-explanatory. Almost always exclusive.
Recycling Your Big Ideas
This is the bread and
butter of freelance writing. Its also called re-slanting.
Once youve got the Big Idea, dont waste it by only using
it once. Use the information youve gathered and come up
with off-shoot ideas. Slant it to appeal to different
markets.
Youre afraid because of the
issue of rights that we just discussed, right? (No pun
intended.) Well, you have nothing to fear, provided the
new article is sufficiently different in content and
intended audience. If youve managed to sell your article
to a major national magazine, it is considered poor form
to try to sell a re-slanted version to another national
magazine.
However, if youre dealing
with regional, specialized, or small publications, there
should be very little overlap of intended audience.
Therefore, an editor from Alabama Aristocrats would
probably never know if you sold a re-slanted version of
your piece to Guitarists Today. Even if they did know,
they almost certainly would not care.
It is standard and accepted
practice, for the simple reason that it is darn difficult
to make a living as a writer. If you have the choice
between making $100 for selling your piece to one small
publication, or making $1000 by selling altered versions
to eight different small publications, which would you
choose?
Re-slanting an article is
easy, since youve already done the bulk of the research.
Scrounge up a few new quotes, and use the information you
left out of the first article. Focus it on the new desired
market.
For example, I could sell
an article about the health benefits of meditation to a
fitness magazine. A few alterations, and that same article
becomes Religions Encouraging Meditation for my local
newspapers Society pages. Then it becomes Meditation Makes
You Smarter for the college market. Then, Meditate Your
Stress Away for a working womans magazine. And I didnt
even mention all those new age/holistic publications. What
a field day!
With just a few more
questions posed to your trusted experts, youve got a whole
new article. And, look! Youre becoming an expert yourself.
This is how you begin to find your nichea few specific
subjects that you feel comfortable writing about. Ah, soon
those journalists will be coming to YOU with their
questions.
"The Extras"
Once youve gotten a few
assignments, and feel that youve really embarked on this
as a potential career (or just a part-time
income-booster), youll want to think about the little
extras.
A nice touch: get yourself
some nice letterhead. Splurge a little with your second or
third paycheck and invest in professionally printed
letterhead. Presentation does count when submitting your
correspondence to an editor. Avoid cutesy clip art of
quill pens and inkwells.
Also, an invoice. You
should always include an invoice with your completed
article. Often, the person you submit the story to is not
the same person in charge of sending you a paycheck. By
including an invoice, you can be reasonably assured that
the billing department will have a record of what terms
were agreed upon, and when they are supposed to pay you.
Receipts: Hold onto your
postage receipts and your writing-related supplies. If
writing is your profession, then these can be tax
write-offs. Also, if you are able to negotiate it, editors
will often reimburse you for any expenses you incur while
on assignment once you are an established writer. Submit
your phone bill (with the reimbursable call/s circled),
your book receipts, your travel expense receipts, etc.
along with your invoice. Make sure these terms are
specified in your contract.
Youre ready? Good! Get out
there and get 'em, slugger. Good luck!
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About
The Author
Jenna
Glatzer is the author of MAKE A REAL
LIVING AS A FREELANCE WRITER, which comes
with a FREE editors' cheat sheet
directory! Check it out at www.jennaglatzer.com.
She's also the editor-in-chief of www.absolutewrite.com,
the most popular online magazine for
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